Procedural Writing

WALHT write a procedure.
Something I learned about writing a procedure is that you have to write it in order.
Something I would like to do better is to use more adverbs.
Here is a photo of my learning

















What you will need
10.5.17
  • Party cups
  • Jelly crystals
  • 1 cup of boiling water
  • Half a cup of cold water
  • A whisk
  • Fruit sticks
  • A measuring cup
  • jug\bowl

Instructions

  1. Prepare the party cups.
  2. Pour 1 cup of boiling water carefully warning Adult help.
  3. Slowly pour the jelly crystals into the bowl.
  4. Dissolve the jelly crystals with a whisk.
  5. Add half a cup of cold water in the bowl.
  6. Leave the jelly cooling down in the fridge for about 20 minutes.
  7. Pour the jelly slowly into the party cups.
  8. Then place the fruit sticks into the party cups.
  9. leave it in the freezer for about 2 hours.
  10. Enjoy.

Statistics

WALHT Interpret data and record our findings.
Something I learned was being a data detective because there are lots of different ways to find data in a Statistics book because Statistics are mostly about data detecting.
Here is a photo of my learning.


















My next step is to challenge my self by having harder data detecting answers and clues.

Dance

We have been learning salsa and hip hop.
I enjoyed salsa because salsa had some really cool dance moves like cross body lead.
Something I learned was the hip hop.

Writing

WALHT add a twist to our writing
Here is my poem                                                              

I didn’t but I did


I didn’t see a person standing on a cloud
I didn’t see a floating hoverboard
I didn’t see a tsunami warning
But I did go see Boss baby

I didn’t go to New York City
I didn’t read an enchanted book
I didn’t blow up Mars
But I did go to Auckland

I didn’t eat a digital clock
I didn’t eat a megalodon's tooth
I didn’t eat a sweet sweet lollipop
But I did eat Korean food

Next time I would like to make my poem more interesting by having bigger words and putting in more detail.